Monday, December 28, 2009

Winter Break Work

This essay is going to show how Byron from the story "Watson's go to Birmingham-1963" is such a bad brother.He is mean and bad.Byron is a bad brother because he is mean to everyone even a bird.Byron is the brother of Kenny and Joeata or Joey.Byron is popular but as Kenny calls him the god of the school.Kenny thinks that Byron is nice but sometimes mean but I think just a bad brother.


Byron is mean to his brother.Byron threw Kenny into a snow bank not caring if he got hurt.Byron was throwing up and Kenny tried to help hm out and Byron punched him and threw apples at him!He ate 2 bags by himself and was getting sick so he forced Kenny to eat the rest.That makes him selfish.Byron was helped Kenny with his lazy eye problem but I think Byron did that so it does not ruin his reputation as the god of the school when having a ugly nerdy brother but Kenny does that himself.In these examples of Byron,s treatment toward Kenny you probably would believe me.

Byron is mean to Joey.Joey and Kenny had to wear bunches of clothes to keep warm but Byron didn't have to wear it all so he made a lie so they don't complain but he scared Joey and made her cry!That also makes him a liar.Byron was playing with lights and his mother had told them about playing with lights.His mother caught him and said she was gonna burn him but Joey saved him.Byron did not listen.That makes him hard headed.Then one day he was burning and playing some game and his mother that she was going to burn him he was extremely scared and he even had a chance to get away but he didn't.That makes him stupid.He had Joey cringing and screaming but in the end she saved him.In these explanations you should really believe he is a bad brother.

In this essay I have given many details supporting that Byron is  a bad brother.He killed a bird with a cookie.He had consideration to make the bird a grave and care but no care for his own brother.That is very harsh.Now you and I know that Byron is horrible mean,stupid,hard headed bad brother.  

     

Monday, December 21, 2009

HW#64

Today I started the fantastically long book called "Eclipse”. It is part of the Twilight saga I saw the movies Twilight and New Moon so after that is Eclipse!!!Yeah! I read that the girl named Bella that dates Edward is being chased by a deranged stalking vampire named Victoria. Victoria is trying to kill Bella because she blames Edward for the losses of her boyfriend’s death so she thinks it is fair to kill his love Bella and Vampires in this story have super strength and speed they also are compatible of Super natural powers. Victoria blames Edward because her boyfriend bit Bella and so Edward sucked the poison out and they knew he would come back so they took every part of his body and burned since he is immortal (that happened in Twilight). A couple of weeks or months after on Bella’s birthday (This happened in New Moon) Edward left her since he thought she was in such danger she he left her, she suffered badly she cried and screamed in the middle of the night. She started hanging out with her best friend Jacob who she felt better with and stopped her behavior but he was a werewolf and she didn’t know so when she found out she was not so surprised because she stared to date him and he wasn’t the first monster she dated. In this story werewolves have super duper speed, appeared when the person became very angry and they only kill vampires if they are on their turf but that is the only thingthey kill. This leads to the story I am reading now, the vampires (the Cullens) and the werewolves are workingsort of together to get Victoria. Bella was talking to Edward of how it would help if she was immortal or a vampire though he told her how a new vampire was on the news but not really said it was a vampire. Jacob and Edward don’t get along since Edward took Jacob’s girlfriend after all Edward had done to her so Edward did not allow Bella to see her best friend (ex-boy friend) but she sneaked off to see him and he was really happythey then told each other what was going on. and

The name Victoria reminds me of Victoria Secret. I think Victoria is insanely… insane .I really feel bad for Jacob. I do because he was dumped harshly.

Nouns-underlined

Pronouns-Italic

Verbs -red

Adverbs-purple

Adjectives-Bold

Saturday, December 19, 2009

HW#63

Today I read “Jiggy. Gerald was stopped by the Pastor and was taken to help the needy. One of the children said “look mommy no holes”. He then went home and was surprised at his house since he … won… 5… thousand… dollars!!!!Yeah! He met Steve’s parents and Steve told him that being Jiggy was not all important. Steve had a conversation with his father about the same thing and so he put the money in his college fund.

I think it was very sad with the homeless children and I would have donated to them that’s how sweet I am.I was right that Steve would do some thing that would make his parents be around more, I still feel sad for Steve.

Thursday, December 17, 2009

HW#62

Today I read "Jiggy”. Gerald was beginning to feel very worried. He saw how fired up it got Ted and Ted in gym had came in first place in the drill .Then a boy in the locker-room had called him a geek so Ted went over and told him his name is Ted then Ted took the boys hand and twisted it till the boy said his name. The next day was day that Gerald had to answer the million dollar question and the pressure was really coming to him. The question was what year, date, group that sang this popular song that was number 1 on the charts for 4 months and was made in 1967.The correct answer was “The Little Humming bird” by the “Silver Spoons” made in 1968 and Gerald answered that! He thought he was wrong because Ted put “The Little Humming bird” by the “Silver Spoons” made in 1967 and he is never wrong but this time he was so Gerald won!


If I were Gerald I would buy mansion at Beverly Hills and buy enough food to live forever. That way I would never have to work. I would not spend it on Jiggy/hot/radical/cool/awesome/unweird clothes.

Wednesday, December 16, 2009

HW#61

Today I read "Jiggy".Gerald took Steve to see his grandparents.They went back to Gerald's old neighborhood which had graffiti,open beer bottles on the ground,condoms on the ground,drug addicts everywhere and more.When Gerald got to his grand parents house he got hugs and kisses and then Gerald got beat in basketball shooting contest by his own 60 year old grandfather.

I think it is very sad story.I think this because how do you get beat by a 60 year old man.I would never show my face in public and I would move away.

Tuesday, December 15, 2009

HW#60

Today I read “Jiggy”. Gerald took Steve to an arcade that just opened. They got in for free since the first 60 people get free all day passes. They were among those people. They won a teddy bear and an action figure for Tyrone and Tonya Gerald’s siblings. Steve was getting a lot of attention from the girls. He was because his clothes were what they call “Jiggy” but the people of today call awesome,cool,amazing,totally radical,hot,off the hook,great and more dude. Tyrone and Tonya were happy.

I think Steve is really nice. I think this because Steve did lots of things for others. In the beginning of the book I thought he was a jerk like person but he ended up being nice.