HW#84

Ark Angel

I think that lots of children have read it because it is Alex Rider a spy a action filled cool  spy book is guaranteed to be read a lot.I would recommend this book to whoever has not read it it actually was recommended to me.I*t is exiting,action filled and cool,there 3 great reasons it should be read.The next book I plan to read is called "Breaking Dawn"from the Twilight Saga it only relates to Ark Angel with some action.I have read...11 boo ks so far. 

 

Spy(James Bond)

HW#82

Today I read "Ark Angel".I read that Alex got shot.He is a spy.His rib got fractured and he could not breath and he survived!He got a stuffed animal that said this message will self destruct in1..2..3..4...5!Booooommmm!!!He lived.He felt so bad he wanted to go to school.Wow!He is a London spy that is 14,recruited after death of uncle,back belt,speaks German,Japanese,and some other languages and what not.

If I were Alex I would have been happy that I am so important.A little happy to get shot(not really).I would never want to go to school,ever.I would not have been happy to be a orphan and a dead uncle.

HW#81

Ark Angel

The bomb had been exactly timed to go off at exactly half past 3

Strangely, the man it had been designed to kill probably knew more about bombs and terrorism than anyone else in the world. He had even written books on the subject. "Looking After Number One: Fifty ways to Protect Yourself at Home and Abroad" might not be the snappiest of titles, but the book had sold twenty thousand copies in America, and it was said that the president himself kept a copy by his bed. The man did not think of himself as a target, but even so, he was always careful. As he often joked, it would be bad for business if he were blown up crossing the street.

His name was Max Webber, and he was short and plump with tortoiseshell glasses and jet-black hair that was actually dyed. He told people that he has once been on the SAS, which was true. What he didn't tell them was that he had been dropped after his first tour of duty. In his forties he had opened a training center in London, advising rich businessmen on how to look after themselves. he had become a writer and a journalist, frequently appearing on television to discuss international security.



This is based on the colors used in class.Nouns are in Bold

HW#80

I do not understand

Hw#79

1.I think the author uses a lot of  simple sentences.

2.
simple sentence:A sentence with 1 subject and predicate
compound sentence:A sentence with  2 complete subject or predicate
complex sentence:A sentence with 1 subject,1 predicate,at least 1 subordinate clause
compound complex sentence:A sentence with 2 complete subjects and predicates and at least 1 subordinate clause

3.
Simple sentence:Some students like to study in the morning.compound sentence:I tried to speak Spanish, and my friend tried to speak English.
complex sentence:When he handed in his homework, he forgot to give the teacher the last page.
compound complex sentence:"Those are my principles, and if you don't like them . . . well, I have others."

HW#77

Today I read Eclipse.I read that the Cullens were going to have their battle with the bad vampires.They were going to battle alongside the wolves instead of against them!Bella had to take one root for the vampires to fallow and another for her to camp out in.Edward stayed with Bella besides the urge to go fight.He stayed because he was afraid Bella might get herself killed.Jacob did too.It was April and it was very cold and snowing.Jacob was always warm and since Bella was freezing he had to warm her up.Bella was warmer but not happy neither was Edward.Jacob had to leave for the battle so he left and another werewolf came to protect her and be a non-electrical cell phone.He is because when werewolves are in wolf form they can read each others minds and it does not matter how far.Edward realized Victoria and and another vampire is coming for Bella.Edward fought Victoria back and killed her head was sliced clean of .The other werewolf killed the other vampire.
This is Victoria

Bad Byron

This essay is going to show how Byron from the story "Watson's go to Birmingham-1963" is such a bad brother.He is mean ,bad,violent.Byron is a bad brother because he is mean to everyone even a bird.Byron is the brother of Kenny and Joeata or Joey.Byron is popular but as Kenny calls him the god of the school.Kenny thinks that Byron is nice but sometimes mean but I think just a bad brother.


Byron is mean to his brother.Byron threw Kenny into a snow bank not caring if he got hurt.Byron was throwing up and Kenny tried to help him out and Byron punched him,threw apples at him,and said"Get the hell out of here you little!He ate 2 bags by himself and was getting sick so he forced Kenny to eat the rest.That makes him selfish and violent.Byron was helped Kenny with his lazy eye problem but I think Byron did that so it does not ruin his reputation as the god of the school when having a ugly nerdy brother but Kenny does that himself.In these examples of Byron,s treatment toward Kenny you probably would believe me.

Byron is mean to Joey.Joey and Kenny had to wear bunches of clothes to keep warm but Byron didn't have to wear it all so he made a lie so they don't complain but he scared Joey and made her cry!That also makes him a liar.Byron was playing with lights and his mother had told them about playing with lights.His mother caught him and said she was gonna burn him but Joey saved him.Byron did not listen.That makes him hard headed.Then one day he was burning and playing some game and his mother that she was going to burn him he was extremely scared and he even had a chance to get away but he didn't.That makes him stupid.He had Joey cringing and screaming but in the end she saved him.In these explanations you should really believe he is a bad brother.

In this essay I have given many details supporting that Byron is  a bad brother.He killed a bird with a cookie.He had consideration to make the bird a grave and care but no care for his own brother.That is very harsh.Now you and I know that Byron is horrible mean,stupid,hard headed bad brother.  

HW#76

Pompeii

The book was about Pompeii.I read the book because it was interesting and a pop-up.I like fiction more than none-fiction.I do because fiction is cooler,creative and more exiting.I would like to read more books about citys and their cultures.I do because it is interesting to know about people across the world.

Hw#75

1. In the book I have not seen much foreshadowing.But I knew Victoria(stalking vampire)was a reason that a vampire stole her clothes.Victoria is making other vampires so they can go kill Bella and not letting Edward know it was her that was doing this,that is foreshadowing.I knew Bella was gonna take thing s to new level.I knew because when Charlie brought it up.
2. I have not seen any symbolism.
3. Bella says Jacob is warmer than the,he is her sun.
   
4. Edward thinks of himself as a cold hard rock,that's a simile.Jacob thinks of Edward as a Leech.
5. The way I became a vampire.

      

The voice of Byron

That square of a dad did something cool he got the ultra glide.I mean this square has to be kidding me.I'll go get my records!This my song!haha!

Now this jive boy listening to "Yakety Yak".He does all the time.Man.

My dad is sending me off to Alabama he thinks that I'll change with grandma Sand's.The mother of that square ain't gonna do nothing to me.I didn't even do nthing wrong.My Jive little brother starting to get on my nerves to.I ain't gonna talk that will show them ugly squares.

The next day...

HW#72

Today I read "Eclipse" .I read that Bella was going to be hidden during the battle but she does not want to be hidden.She is also worried about others getting hurt.She learns that Sam's(the commander wolf)girlfriend is also a werewolf.The werewolves are fighting along side the vampire instead of against them but they still are because they are fighting bad vampires.It is like Batman and the penguin VS the evil penguin.I think it is stupid why don't just go up to the Volturi( the ruling vampires that avoid exposing their kind)tell and get them to kill the bad ones.
Edward and them just don't want them to get Bella.

I find it very strange that a girl can be werewolf.I do because you don't see most women get so angry they turn to dogs.The Volturi said that it was very strange that nobody's powers work on her.I think it has to do that her boyfriend is a vampire and her best friend is a werewolf and is falling in love with her.hmmm???

This is Jacob!!!!!

HW#71

Today I read "Eclipse".I read that Bella was graduating from high school.Bella was not having a great graduation but not a bad 1,she figured out that this vampire who has been killing in Seattle and stealing her clothes was making a army of newborn vampires that are stronger than the older species of vampires.She went and tried to be happy for her graduation.Then she went to Edward's home since Alice(Edward's younger sister)was throwing a party.Bella was wondering if anybody would come but Edward said that everyone will come since they want to know what the mysterious(vampire)Cullen's home would look like.ooh!She was actually liking the party until Jacob came who she invited but uninvited after he kissed her.He also dragged 2 of his other werewolf friends along who "looked like they were being tortured".He gave Bella gift but Bella was not really paying attention she was looking for Alice and Edward because they got really worried and left.Bella wanted to ask Alice what she had seen in her vision of the future.Jacob saw what was going on and asked what is the bad news.Bella was being cornered by 3 werewolves and was then trapped in with Bella but Jasper scared Jacob's hand hand away so they could pass and keep his arm.They had a right to know so Alice told him and he has offered to help.

If I were Alice and I would have to fight over 20 new born vampires and could tell the future I would have seen how I could take him down and done it.I think Jacob is taking a wolf like liking to Bella and that is very bad.

HW#70

WRITE

A.

1.inscription,mom

2.snap,the

3.logobook,you

4.didn't,throw

5.night,that

6.changed,on

B.

1.My pediatricion treats infants,children and teenagers

2.I will nag,pester and torment until you gives in.

3.Did you know,Paul,that warts are caused by a virus.

4.Dad was June 2,1984 the date you and mom got married.

C.

Mike: Dad were in Providence,Rhode Island and we've got a dilemma,with the car.                                 Dad: Oh,is everyone all right?

Mike:Yes,were fine,but the car just started vibrating,bucking and acting weird.

Mike: From what you said,Mike,I believe that you forgot to check your gas gauge.You,Mark and Anthony remain inthe car,put the hazard lights on and wait for me.

HW#69

I don't think things will be much different this year (2010).I hope that I don't get into as much trouble as last year and I get more gifts next Christmas and B-day.I play Baseball and this year I hope I'm bringing game!!!Yeah! Though I will be playing Golf more.I want to get a cellphone though it is going to be expensive it is a...PSP(Play Station Portable)/Sidekick.I will Love it.I do hope my father will give me more responsibilities like me being able to walk home alone.I also would like more freedom.I never get to see any of my friends.I think I will change these things by behaving and being nicer.Then I will get my PSP/Sidekick,responsibilities and more.I hope to stay away from all those diseases like H1N1,Influenza, and more.I hope to finish school with a good grade.I hope to get a better relationship with my sister and everyone else in my family.I hope U.S wins world cup.

I finally hope to have a world with....

                     

This is gonna go by the colors that are shown on the website http://fdaela.blogspot.com/.I will put nouns bold and this is rewrite of HW#67

HW#68

Today I read "Eclipse".I read that when Bella was at home Jacob picked her up since they are best friends/ex-lovers and Edward does not like him since Edward is her  vampire boy-friend.Vampire's have special powers like Edward being able to read minds but he can't read Bella's so when Jacob came he heard   that Jacob was screaming his thoughts in his heads and plans to tell those thoughts to Bella.When they went to his territory which is La Push(sounds fancy)it is a land with throw down homes like cabins.Jacob had been very tired and bad,he fell asleep and then he took her outside and told her he loves her and not like friends say they love each other like boy-friend and girl-friend!Then Jacob kissed her!!!She then punched him and broke her hand.Then Edward warned Jacob to back off.

If I were Edward I would have killed Jacob made a grave for him and would have made it my toilet,take his  fur and use it as a winter jacket then drank his blood as a souvenir.I sort of feel bad for Bella because Jacob kissed her and she could not push him off and when he was done she punched him and he didn't even know.Jacob had told Bella how werewolves fall in love with some one and end up hurting that person and I think this is happening to Bella it is called stamping.

HW#67

I don't think things will be much different this year.I hope that I don't get in to as much trouble as last year and I get more gifts next Christmas and B-day.I play Baseball and this year I hope I am bringing game!!!Yeah! Though I will be playing Golf more.I want to get a cellphone though it is going to be expensive it is a...PSP(Play Station Portable)/Sidekick.I will Love it.I do hope my father will give me more responsibilities like me being able to walk home alone.I also would like more freedom.I never get to see any of my friends.I think I will change these things by behaving and being nicer.Then I will get my PSP/Sidekick,responsibilities and more.I hope to stay away from all those diseases like H1N1,Influenza, and more.I hope to finish school with a good grade.I hope to get a better relationship with my sister and everyone else in my family.I hope U.S wins world cup.
I finally hope to have a world with.... 

HW#66

Today I continued reading the fantastically long book called "Eclipse”.Bella is going to graduate and when she does she is due to become a vampire.Rosalie had told her story of how she became a vampire(a fairy tale).Bella is being hunted by new vampires and these vampires do not know the rules of how they are suppose to stay hidden so she is eager and scared to become a vampire.She is also being stalked by a deranged obsessive stalking vampire named Victoria.She then heard Jasper's story(horror story).


I think Jasper is cool but a bit to violent.I think he is cool because he is very nice.I think he is violent becausehe tried to kill Bella on her birthday but it was not his fault.